Graphic Design student portfolio work from 2-year Mount Wachusett Community College and critical analysis of the work.
Tuesday, April 12, 2016
Spieler Ad, Mark 2
The only real change I made here was redesigning the logo to something more readable and more bold, and changing the position of the elements. All thoughts and advice welcome.
Ian – logo, still too big. Better colors and placement though. I suggest you reduce it at least 60% and add a web address below it. And then, place in carefully in relation to the big words… it should be “part” of that element… and not a completely separate small one. Have you tried to distort it as well, so it really does become part of the words… and we’ll read “Spieler, as tough as you are.”
I do not have any suggestions.
ReplyDeleteIan – logo, still too big. Better colors and placement though. I suggest you reduce it at least 60% and add a web address below it. And then, place in carefully in relation to the big words… it should be “part” of that element… and not a completely separate small one. Have you tried to distort it as well, so it really does become part of the words… and we’ll read “Spieler, as tough as you are.”
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