Carl – I suggest you place the title above the head, not below it. I believe your body text could use some additional leading, and possibly be a pt size smaller… so your lines fill out a bit more, creating a smoother ragged right edge. Consider placing that plate and apple core in the middle of the columns, and text wrap around the sides. Please only use the orange text styling one 1 quote, and the quote that makes the most sense is “Today more working people and their families are hungry because wages have declined.” Please use the same font as the by-line – and not the small caps that I currently see. Also – consider “pulling” the quote out of the paragraph and repeat under the plate/apple. In other words - leave the body text quote in place, but use it again, in orange elsewhere on the page (under the plate/apple?).
It’s nice to see you are starting to use some type styling on the page.
I still think the hair coming down his face needs a little tweaking. There is a spot where there is a empty spot in the hairline
ReplyDeleteCarl – I suggest you place the title above the head, not below it. I believe your body text could use some additional leading, and possibly be a pt size smaller… so your lines fill out a bit more, creating a smoother ragged right edge. Consider placing that plate and apple core in the middle of the columns, and text wrap around the sides. Please only use the orange text styling one 1 quote, and the quote that makes the most sense is “Today more working people and their families are hungry because wages have declined.” Please use the same font as the by-line – and not the small caps that I currently see. Also – consider “pulling” the quote out of the paragraph and repeat under the plate/apple. In other words - leave the body text quote in place, but use it again, in orange elsewhere on the page (under the plate/apple?).
ReplyDeleteIt’s nice to see you are starting to use some type styling on the page.