Friday, April 8, 2016

Project 5 Rework 3

Here is the rework of Project 5. I enlarged the end of the first line to make it more readable. Let me know what you think.


2 comments:

  1. Better, danger needs more tweaking some kerning is needed.

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  2. Last 2 lines are too small... look at these 4 lines as a continuum... with the same percentage of reduction between them. Right now it appears like "... is that it will end." takes an uneven, and huge, jump down in size.

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