Carl – cover letter… logo much much much too big. I should sit just where I see it sitting on your resume with your contact info next to it.
Resume – that curvy line is not really curvey, and doesn’t appear to have the same style as the lines in your logo. Why not? If this is a problem, drop the line. Just don’t use it. Or… print out a version with no line, and experiment with it by hand using a pencil. When you have just the right line that will not crowd the type, and yet has a smooth curve to it – then add it with the pen tool.
I’m changing my mind about the typeface to use – I think you ought to use the heading font for all the type, since it seems to capture a quirky attitude when used for your contact information. Try using it for all the body copy at the size I see in your contact info.
Please indent the list of software under that small heading. AND… because the heading is getting lost, maybe you should use orange again… sorry but you have to find the right contrast to that this Chead doesn’t challenge the Bheads that sit down the left side of the page, but still acts as a heading for the software section. Indenting the line that start “Adobe Creative Suite” will help.
Dietary Aid – move that below the name of the business, and italize it. Capitalize the first word in the following lines (Delivered, Followed, Assisted)… and all should be past tense, right?
Carl – cover letter… logo much much much too big. I should sit just where I see it sitting on your resume with your contact info next to it.
ReplyDeleteResume – that curvy line is not really curvey, and doesn’t appear to have the same style as the lines in your logo. Why not? If this is a problem, drop the line. Just don’t use it. Or… print out a version with no line, and experiment with it by hand using a pencil. When you have just the right line that will not crowd the type, and yet has a smooth curve to it – then add it with the pen tool.
I’m changing my mind about the typeface to use – I think you ought to use the heading font for all the type, since it seems to capture a quirky attitude when used for your contact information. Try using it for all the body copy at the size I see in your contact info.
Please indent the list of software under that small heading. AND… because the heading is getting lost, maybe you should use orange again… sorry but you have to find the right contrast to that this Chead doesn’t challenge the Bheads that sit down the left side of the page, but still acts as a heading for the software section. Indenting the line that start “Adobe Creative Suite” will help.
Dietary Aid – move that below the name of the business, and italize it. Capitalize the first word in the following lines (Delivered, Followed, Assisted)… and all should be past tense, right?