Carl – night sky looks good. I even see a star with a soft glow… nice. Want to add a few more of those?
The top type section is starting to get interesting and fulfill its destiny as the first section we should read. But… keep going. Consider using bright white for the words “Cruise’In” and enlarge those words – there is a lot of space up there that you could use for that. Notice the apostrophe – it makes sense to add it.
Please move the line “Grand Prize… to the very bottom – this isn’t something we need to know so soon… it should sit nicely along the bottom of the poster – maybe just in 1 line.
Do not weaken the silhouette of the motorcycle… it is important that we see it, to help us understand what this event is all about. Did you reduce it? Why? Not a good decision
Is the motorcycle supposed to be lost in the fog? I am not a fan of the glow inside the text and I would show the motorcycle more.
ReplyDeleteCarl – night sky looks good. I even see a star with a soft glow… nice. Want to add a few more of those?
ReplyDeleteThe top type section is starting to get interesting and fulfill its destiny as the first section we should read. But… keep going. Consider using bright white for the words “Cruise’In” and enlarge those words – there is a lot of space up there that you could use for that. Notice the apostrophe – it makes sense to add it.
Please move the line “Grand Prize… to the very bottom – this isn’t something we need to know so soon… it should sit nicely along the bottom of the poster – maybe just in 1 line.
Do not weaken the silhouette of the motorcycle… it is important that we see it, to help us understand what this event is all about. Did you reduce it? Why? Not a good decision
Carl - I forgot to mention that you should NOT make this type fuzzy. Never make type fuzzy... it just makes it hard to read.
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