Carl – Is this supposed to be funny? I find myself smiling as I see the silhouette that reminds me of the Karate Kid movies. I think you should leave the cover just as is, but correct the grammar and spelling. Here is what it needs to be:
The Boxing Man He was taught that the secret to boxing lies in the mind and the heart…. not in the gloves.
In the year 3030, a man who was once lost in the world, living high in the mountains, had a life changing vision about his greatest rival Liam Sullivan. He uprooted his life and moved to Los Angeles to learn from an old boxing master… where he was reborn as the outlaw known as “The Boxing Man.”
Please do not indent the first paragraph on the back cover, no need. Use Flush left alignment, and use consistent leading throughout. There is no need to use the display font for the title name at the end… can you see that it does not work as body copy? It is too weak at that small size (that is why we have the category “Display”… for headings only – remember?). Please allow the photo to be a bit taller, pulling it down over the teeny tiny slice of brown at its bottom.
Carl – Is this supposed to be funny? I find myself smiling as I see the silhouette that reminds me of the Karate Kid movies. I think you should leave the cover just as is, but correct the grammar and spelling. Here is what it needs to be:
ReplyDeleteThe Boxing Man
He was taught that the secret to boxing lies in the mind and the heart…. not in the gloves.
In the year 3030, a man who was once lost in the world, living high in the mountains, had a life changing vision about his greatest rival Liam Sullivan. He uprooted his life and moved to Los Angeles to learn from an old boxing master… where he was reborn as the outlaw known as “The Boxing Man.”
Please do not indent the first paragraph on the back cover, no need. Use Flush left alignment, and use consistent leading throughout. There is no need to use the display font for the title name at the end… can you see that it does not work as body copy? It is too weak at that small size (that is why we have the category “Display”… for headings only – remember?). Please allow the photo to be a bit taller, pulling it down over the teeny tiny slice of brown at its bottom.