Carl – Most of the panels now make good sense – nice. However, I’m not sure the last spread makes enough sense as it is. With About Us on the left, and really nothing on the right… it doesn’t seem to use the space in a way we would expect. I think we would expect more eating items and then an About Us on the last inside panel. So – what about moving About Us over to the right, and find some Entrée items to place on the left? I think with that change, the menu will be complete.
Carl – Most of the panels now make good sense – nice. However, I’m not sure the last spread makes enough sense as it is. With About Us on the left, and really nothing on the right… it doesn’t seem to use the space in a way we would expect. I think we would expect more eating items and then an About Us on the last inside panel. So – what about moving About Us over to the right, and find some Entrée items to place on the left? I think with that change, the menu will be complete.
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