I agree with the re-sizing of the stars. That might also help make the text a little more readable (right now, the big, bright stars are messing with the bright yellow text).
Carl – yeah, we see a more realistic night sky. I agree with above comments – NO SNOW… they are stars that, as the designer, you have placed carefully so that they do not interfere with the typography. Speaking of typography – please pull down that heading that is too close to the top edge… why is it so far away from the rest of the type in the sky? Have you considered what should be emphasized in that title? You are starting to think about that because I see that you have capitalized the words Cruise In. Good – now keep thinking about that. Maybe those words should be sitting on their own line, and be enlarged? This is a poster, after all – and so that line could/should be much larger than the rest.
How strange that you are repeating the contact person at the bottom. That doesn’t make sense, does it? I suggest you keep the small type that is centered in the middle and add the Date and time to that “chunk” of text too. Delete the text at bottom left.
WOW, Carl you almost got it just make the stars smaller because it looks like snow right now.
ReplyDeleteI agree with the re-sizing of the stars. That might also help make the text a little more readable (right now, the big, bright stars are messing with the bright yellow text).
ReplyDeleteCarl – yeah, we see a more realistic night sky. I agree with above comments – NO SNOW… they are stars that, as the designer, you have placed carefully so that they do not interfere with the typography. Speaking of typography – please pull down that heading that is too close to the top edge… why is it so far away from the rest of the type in the sky? Have you considered what should be emphasized in that title? You are starting to think about that because I see that you have capitalized the words Cruise In. Good – now keep thinking about that. Maybe those words should be sitting on their own line, and be enlarged? This is a poster, after all – and so that line could/should be much larger than the rest.
ReplyDeleteHow strange that you are repeating the contact person at the bottom. That doesn’t make sense, does it? I suggest you keep the small type that is centered in the middle and add the Date and time to that “chunk” of text too. Delete the text at bottom left.