Tom, I think this is the right idea. So now, make sure not to distort too much and fill the space in a way that suggests, “floating.” Notice… I said “fill the space”… you should look at the space up in the sky and add the type to fill it more fully. Enlarging some of this is a good idea, so we can more easily read it. Also – I would concentrate on the space above the foreground penguin – wrapping the type in a way that establishes a connection, a relationship, with that penguin.
I like it, but I find "danger in" hard to read. But other than that it looks awesome.
ReplyDeleteI like the 3-D look however, it is a little difficult to read that is what I thought at first glance.
ReplyDeleteTom, I think this is the right idea. So now, make sure not to distort too much and fill the space in a way that suggests, “floating.” Notice… I said “fill the space”… you should look at the space up in the sky and add the type to fill it more fully. Enlarging some of this is a good idea, so we can more easily read it. Also – I would concentrate on the space above the foreground penguin – wrapping the type in a way that establishes a connection, a relationship, with that penguin.
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