Krysta – My first thought is that the dull pink in the background lessens the contrast around your logo, and actually may make the page look a bit dirty. Is it needed? I also question the roses at top right… not sure, after you have considered how your address will work with your logo, that you need it repeated so close to your logo. The flowers at bottom are a different matter, and could work nicely as long as you wrap your last section around them. The overprinting makes the text too hard to read.
Back to your contact information position and styling. I think you need to consider this as part of your logo in the letterhead composition. How could this information sit and have a relationship with your logo. Maybe smaller, running out on a baseline that aligns with the bottom of the camera? This could technically be 3 lines instead of 5:
Krysta Kay 15 Morris St., Fitchburgh, MA 01420 978-549-3721 email?? Krysta.kay@comcast.net
Krysta – My first thought is that the dull pink in the background lessens the contrast around your logo, and actually may make the page look a bit dirty. Is it needed? I also question the roses at top right… not sure, after you have considered how your address will work with your logo, that you need it repeated so close to your logo. The flowers at bottom are a different matter, and could work nicely as long as you wrap your last section around them. The overprinting makes the text too hard to read.
ReplyDeleteBack to your contact information position and styling. I think you need to consider this as part of your logo in the letterhead composition. How could this information sit and have a relationship with your logo. Maybe smaller, running out on a baseline that aligns with the bottom of the camera? This could technically be 3 lines instead of 5:
Krysta Kay
15 Morris St., Fitchburgh, MA 01420 978-549-3721
email?? Krysta.kay@comcast.net
Email needed, and fix the “t” in street.