Carl - you have a tendency to design to the edges... leaving the typographic elements falling off the page and holes in the middle of your compositions. Please fight this! You can do it. There is no reason why that large heading should be hugging the upper left corner. Pull it down and into the format, to a prominent place in the composition. The green blob that sits on the globe seems to be very close in color to the green in the globe. Is there a reason for this? Should it be seen “behind” that blobby shape? I think so… so please shift the blobby color to something that will contrast with the globe, and not unify with it.
Carl - you have a tendency to design to the edges... leaving the typographic elements falling off the page and holes in the middle of your compositions. Please fight this! You can do it. There is no reason why that large heading should be hugging the upper left corner. Pull it down and into the format, to a prominent place in the composition. The green blob that sits on the globe seems to be very close in color to the green in the globe. Is there a reason for this? Should it be seen “behind” that blobby shape? I think so… so please shift the blobby color to something that will contrast with the globe, and not unify with it.
ReplyDeleteAlso... go back to the red headline... it will need to be in high contrast as it moves inward.
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