Graphic Design student portfolio work from 2-year Mount Wachusett Community College and critical analysis of the work.
Saturday, April 16, 2016
Fantasy composite
This is a composite of Little Red Riding Hood, I may have got carried away with the firefly's. This is one of my favorite assignments. The little girl is my fiance's granddaughter and the wolf is actually a coyote also my own image.
Krysta – too many fireflies? No way… I think you need to add more – of different sizes. The air should be full of them – why not?
As I look closely at this – I don’t think the viewer will believe that the cute little face actually is inside that cloak. It does not appear to be read because we do not see any shadows along the edges of the hood – like there really would be if the lantern was casting shadows up there. I suggest you pay some attention to that area, as well as the bright blue of her shirt. It is too bright… that neck area would be in deep shadow I think.
Do you think the wolf should be bigger… more of a threat, a scary element in the picture?
Krysta – too many fireflies? No way… I think you need to add more – of different sizes. The air should be full of them – why not?
ReplyDeleteAs I look closely at this – I don’t think the viewer will believe that the cute little face actually is inside that cloak. It does not appear to be read because we do not see any shadows along the edges of the hood – like there really would be if the lantern was casting shadows up there. I suggest you pay some attention to that area, as well as the bright blue of her shirt. It is too bright… that neck area would be in deep shadow I think.
Do you think the wolf should be bigger… more of a threat, a scary element in the picture?