Carl – the type on the front is not correct grammar, please use this:
He learned that the secret to boxing lies in the mind and the heart. Not in the gloves.
I don’t understand why the title is FL and the subheading is centered. You know better than that – right? And, please look at the big typo on the back cover - Starring (not Staring… that means someone is looking hard at something). And that should be 1 line “Starring Matt Barrett & Liam Sullivan” dropped down away from the paragraph about the movie because this content is 2 very different things…. they should not sit so closely. In fact, this 1 line should be smaller, and italic… and centered. Showing us that you know the content is not the same.
Last thought - would a nice dark grey (found in the rocks on the cover) work better for the background color?
Carl – the type on the front is not correct grammar, please use this:
ReplyDeleteHe learned that the secret to boxing lies in the mind and the heart. Not in the gloves.
I don’t understand why the title is FL and the subheading is centered. You know better than that – right? And, please look at the big typo on the back cover - Starring (not Staring… that means someone is looking hard at something). And that should be 1 line “Starring Matt Barrett & Liam Sullivan” dropped down away from the paragraph about the movie because this content is 2 very different things…. they should not sit so closely. In fact, this 1 line should be smaller, and italic… and centered. Showing us that you know the content is not the same.
Last thought - would a nice dark grey (found in the rocks on the cover) work better for the background color?