Friday, April 8, 2016
Project 8 Rework1- The Mount Observer, March 2016
Here I have the front-and-back page and center fold spreads from the March 2016 issue of the Mount Observer that I designed. I've made a few tweaks to the photo captions and credits, making them smaller and placed in the right positions. Let me know what you think.
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Looks like lot of work was put into this design. I think "Oh the opportunities" looks stretched and distorted. Perhaps it was supposed to but looks off to me.
ReplyDeleteTom – Page 7 has some random lines that appear crowded above the horizontal rule and under the Bruins: Defense Must Improve photo. Do you see them? You need to make sure the 3 columns under that photo align horizontally with the columns to the left. You have a short last time, so you have some room to do this.
ReplyDeleteThe article at the bottom of Page 7 has a very short last column. Work that negative space up between the 2 articles, separating them a bit more. Drop the whole section down on the page, to increase negative space between the 2 articles, and the type should flow around to help fill that short last column.
Page 6 – does that box at bottom with “Work for Us!” follow the grid? I don’t think so. I wonder if it could sit in 2 or 3 column width and the type could wrap around it? It would make more sense on the page, I think.