Graphic Design student portfolio work from 2-year Mount Wachusett Community College and critical analysis of the work.
Friday, April 8, 2016
Project 3 Rework 4
Here is the new version of the Dover Demon piece. I moved the text and made it smaller to try to better fill in the remaining negative space in the sky. I also lightened up the horizon line a bit. Let me know what you think.
Type - YES! But... it is too low on the page.... it should be floating in the middle of all that blackness and not crowding the alien... we should be feeling like there is a lot of space out there in the flat lands of this landscape. It is more scary that way.
OOH, I like the placement of the text; I think of a news story. I like this copy.
ReplyDeleteTom with Glasses, I would consider this done. It has come along way, nice job.
ReplyDeleteType - YES! But... it is too low on the page.... it should be floating in the middle of all that blackness and not crowding the alien... we should be feeling like there is a lot of space out there in the flat lands of this landscape. It is more scary that way.
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