Tom – I’m going to step backwards a bit, and give you some contrary advice to the previous advice I gave you. If you don’t want to work more detail into the back sky area… then the type really does need to sit in that area rather than hug the left top of the design - right in the middle of the composition in the black area. One thought would be to use a small typewriter font, on one line with an ellipse (…) after the line… so we are led to believe that this is someone’s “report” of the sighting, and there will be more to come (clearly, as we can see the alien is about to be discovered). Would you consider allowing the text to help fill the page, although it will need to get substantionaly smaller?
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ReplyDeleteTom – I’m going to step backwards a bit, and give you some contrary advice to the previous advice I gave you. If you don’t want to work more detail into the back sky area… then the type really does need to sit in that area rather than hug the left top of the design - right in the middle of the composition in the black area. One thought would be to use a small typewriter font, on one line with an ellipse (…) after the line… so we are led to believe that this is someone’s “report” of the sighting, and there will be more to come (clearly, as we can see the alien is about to be discovered). Would you consider allowing the text to help fill the page, although it will need to get substantionaly smaller?
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