Carl – do you think those paragraphs have enough leading to be really readable? Also – you have 2 paragraphs that talk about “Interesting Facts” – and I’m wondering why they are separated with his bio information. That is what “chunking” means… to pull together content that is similar, and separate content that isn’t. So pull out his bio, and move up Georgia to sit directly under Verdana. THEN – pull them both down – so there is some negative space between the heading and the start of your paragraphs… currently Verdana is practically crashing into the heading.
I think it is time that you consider really enlarging his portrait and bleeding it off the bottom (since that is what this portrait already does). Then, add a text wrap to the “shape” of his portrait – so the type will follow the lovely contour of his head.
The bio information should sit at the bottom of the page… and be “chunked” with the bottom of his portrait… so we know they belong together.
I like this project, I do notice is in proximity of HTML move it up some.
ReplyDeleteCarl – do you think those paragraphs have enough leading to be really readable? Also – you have 2 paragraphs that talk about “Interesting Facts” – and I’m wondering why they are separated with his bio information. That is what “chunking” means… to pull together content that is similar, and separate content that isn’t. So pull out his bio, and move up Georgia to sit directly under Verdana. THEN – pull them both down – so there is some negative space between the heading and the start of your paragraphs… currently Verdana is practically crashing into the heading.
ReplyDeleteI think it is time that you consider really enlarging his portrait and bleeding it off the bottom (since that is what this portrait already does). Then, add a text wrap to the “shape” of his portrait – so the type will follow the lovely contour of his head.
The bio information should sit at the bottom of the page… and be “chunked” with the bottom of his portrait… so we know they belong together.