Carl – the left page is now readable, good. So, it is the right page that needs some work. Please look for opportunities to place your elements where they can share vertical alignment with each other. The Batell Trail photo and the lower right photo should align on their left sides… they don’t quite align right now. And, adding a drop shadow to only 1 will also throw this off. Either you are going to use a drop shadow on all your photos, or none of them. You decide… ask yourself “do I need to do that?” If the answer is yes, then do it consistently.
Body copy – it is hard for us to read a whole paragraph of FR type – no can do. So please stick with FL body copy, but add more negative space between your columns… the type appears to be crashing between your columns at the bottom and also crashing into the photo. You need a wider margin and an increased text wrap to push that caption away from the photo.
Carl – the left page is now readable, good. So, it is the right page that needs some work. Please look for opportunities to place your elements where they can share vertical alignment with each other. The Batell Trail photo and the lower right photo should align on their left sides… they don’t quite align right now. And, adding a drop shadow to only 1 will also throw this off. Either you are going to use a drop shadow on all your photos, or none of them. You decide… ask yourself “do I need to do that?” If the answer is yes, then do it consistently.
ReplyDeleteBody copy – it is hard for us to read a whole paragraph of FR type – no can do. So please stick with FL body copy, but add more negative space between your columns… the type appears to be crashing between your columns at the bottom and also crashing into the photo. You need a wider margin and an increased text wrap to push that caption away from the photo.