Graphic Design student portfolio work from 2-year Mount Wachusett Community College and critical analysis of the work.
Sunday, February 21, 2016
Hi again, So I went back to my magazine cover and found more changes to be made. I changed the text size to create less negative space. I really like the changes, thank you Coni for your excellent input.
I love these changes I love how much the parrot stands out. One thing that kinda stood out to me is that "Stop The Squawk" seems to be stretched long and doesn't go with the bottom text "Parrot require like-long plans". I wasn't sure if that was a mistake that you noticed or it was intentional.
Well... it looks like you are working on just the issue I wrote about. I still think the type could be lower on the page, so the parrot's beak isn't being attacked by the type! Nice work.
I love these changes I love how much the parrot stands out. One thing that kinda stood out to me is that "Stop The Squawk" seems to be stretched long and doesn't go with the bottom text "Parrot require like-long plans". I wasn't sure if that was a mistake that you noticed or it was intentional.
ReplyDeleteYes you right Tatjana ;-) I will just retype that whole text box. I couldn't fix it by undoing my distortion.
ReplyDeleteWell... it looks like you are working on just the issue I wrote about. I still think the type could be lower on the page, so the parrot's beak isn't being attacked by the type! Nice work.
ReplyDeleteI actually did lower and resized the type. However, I will work more on adjusting and fine tuning the type.
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