I agree with Krysta to some extent; you might want to condense and resize the graphic and text to better fit the shirt. Otherwise, I think you are definitely getting closer to to right balance of "wildness" and readability in this design.
I agree with Krysta to some extent; you might want to condense and resize the graphic and text to better fit the shirt. Otherwise, I think you are definitely getting closer to to right balance of "wildness" and readability in this design.
Carl – you have lost one of the successful things about this design – the way you had integrated the word “Wildness” with the illustration. It was placed at the top of the face, and added excitement in the way it overlaid the image. Please put it back! Then… take ALL the other type, style it consistently in 1 font (maybe 2 at the most) and place the phrase on horizontal baselines below the bear… so we can just read it. You are working really hard to make this as unreadable as you can… why? Please use only white type in a readable font for this phrase, and place the words next to each other – don’t make us work so hard… because we won’t and your message will be completely lost.
HI, I think the design just should be scaled down to fit the shirt better.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Krysta to some extent; you might want to condense and resize the graphic and text to better fit the shirt. Otherwise, I think you are definitely getting closer to to right balance of "wildness" and readability in this design.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Krysta to some extent; you might want to condense and resize the graphic and text to better fit the shirt. Otherwise, I think you are definitely getting closer to to right balance of "wildness" and readability in this design.
ReplyDeleteCarl – you have lost one of the successful things about this design – the way you had integrated the word “Wildness” with the illustration. It was placed at the top of the face, and added excitement in the way it overlaid the image. Please put it back! Then… take ALL the other type, style it consistently in 1 font (maybe 2 at the most) and place the phrase on horizontal baselines below the bear… so we can just read it. You are working really hard to make this as unreadable as you can… why? Please use only white type in a readable font for this phrase, and place the words next to each other – don’t make us work so hard… because we won’t and your message will be completely lost.
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